Monday, July 21, 2014

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1.Since 1950s, fossil fuels supplied most of the world’ s energy needs,meanwhile,a series consequences were caused by using fossil fules and the exhaustion of it was predicted.The energy strategy is to replace fossil fuels by a new source.

2.Under the government control, Sweden follows sustainable development as a key to ensure a sound environment for current and future generations. Besides, Sweden became the first nation that has to pay tax from emitting carbon dioxide emissions from fossil fuels (Rosenthal, 2010). To illustrate, Stockholm, capital of Sweden, has decreased carbon dioxide emissions by one-fourth since 1990 and aims to be completely no fossil fuel use by 2050.

3.Over the last century, the shortage of the energy and the destruction of the environment have been a severe problem for many countries. Therefore, the sustainable development has been paid much attention since the 1980s. The sustainable development means that the people can meet their  needs at present without  influencing the future generations to meet their own needs.(source) This essay will discuss two aspects sustainable strategies, finding out how they can effect the sustainable development. It will focus on the energy strategy such as solar and wind and the environmental strategy such as green economy and green deal.

4.The essence of sustainable development is simply this: to provide for the fundamental needs to humankind without doing violence to the natural system of life on earth.(SOURCE)

5.As for the energy on the earth is increasingly scare, the government of China has taken a series of action to address this issue. One of the policies they promote is that China offer tax rebates on solar power.(SOURCE: http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/business-24327405)

6.However, biogas energy can be uneffective as governments need to establish a well-rounded pipe network to ensure sufficiently transport biogas. For instance, even though biogas fuels is about 20 percent cheaper than gasoline, residents in Kristianstad were reluctant to spend extra $4000 on a biogas or dual-fuel car unless the supply of biogas would keep sufficient and the construction of net work will keeping growing, to the extent that citizens in suburb area would be capable for this energy(source).

7.With the rapid development on economy in China from 1970s, many problems have gradually appeared. In the big cities, such as Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou, some similar urban troubles exist. For example, overloaded population (12.7 million in Guangzhou, 2011, from NBS), traffic congestion, water shortage.

8.When asked about the biggest problem today, many people say that it is the serious energy crisis and pollution .Over the last century, the non-renewable resources, such as coal, oil and natural gas were consumed constantly and lead to pollution. It is important to set effective strategy for sustainable development and need population to follow the ideas. This essay will discuss two sustainable strategies, wind power and green vehicle, whether they worked well and how to support the continued development.

9.Over the past three decade the world faced problems in the lifestyle consumer such as,  scarcity of natural resources, pollution, global warming and depletion of non-renewable resources. Consequently, search for alternatives sustained working on the balance between the objectives and environmental protection  which called sustainable development . "The word 'sustainable' means maintainable or bearable. Hence sustainable development refers to that development which may be prolonged for a considerable period of time or which may be bear¬able by the system and the society"( www.preservearticles.com).

10.Introduction
            Over two century, the intelligent of human invent much more technologies and create an innovative machine to make their life become more comfortable such as electronic machine. People feel they can live with facilities until the end of lifetime with no care about what is going to be happen to the next generation. If people can image background of things or what their have to exchange for them they might know the cost of resources that they lost for everyday of life. For example, in this period, people have seen the news about the deterioration of the environment, depletion of natural resources and over energy consumption are increasing each day. The followed effect is the greatest problems that have never appeared before in human history global warming. With the increasing concern of over the dangerous phenomenon people have invented the concept of using a new form of human life that suit with current situation which is called sustainable development. It is clear that nowadays some governments in developed countries turn to think about the solution that can save the world by send out the specific policy which match with their own economy. This essay will first describe how to use sustainable development in transportation, followed by new efficient strategy of agriculture and then focus on evaluate of both solution.

11.People have used non-renewable resources without taking into account about environmental issue. Then, consuming huge amount of resources leads it to a scarcity problem, which cause the increasing in price.  Using fossil fuels causes environment problems, such as carbon dioxide emission, global warming and climate change.


12.Biogas, one of the alternative resources, produces from waste such as detritus, old landfill, sewage pond, wood waste from flooring factories and tree pruning. To create energy from biogas, it has to transfer the waste of food in the biological process. The system will burn a gas to create heat and electricity or refine gas for transportation, so this can reduce the consumption of fossil fuels in the great amount. For example, Kristianstad has changed itself from using fossil fuel into biogas for a decade ago which saved $3.8 million on the cost of fossil fuels in production of heat and electricity and reduces half a million gallons of diesel each year. Biogas produces less carbon dioxide emission than fossil fuel because it is a renewable energy made from biological waste, a clean energy. Moreover, government also supports and encourages businesses and citizen by subsidies. For instance, a tiny pellet, one form of wood waste, produces less carbon dioxide when burning them in this form. Therefore, the government encourages people for using pellet furnaces with the guarantee purchases by government. This can eliminate 64 tons of carbon dioxide emissions and costs only half of the oil used.

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